I have decided to shift the last post into the end of the story. Moving the story line back in time will allow me to remove any reference to backstory. I started the draft using dialogue and will fill in the narration in time. My goal is to keep using third person for my POV.
This is how Chapter 1 will begin.
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Karla angrily kicked the dirt with her foot, sending a rock skidding across the lawn. “Jan, I can’t stand it! Why do my folks hav…
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Posted on March 11, 2009 at 5:41pm — 1 Comment
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